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»Broken and affraid«







this is a song i wrote don't be too judgemental

Tonight was gonna be the night
it was gonna be true
until you came along
and ruined it all

I left work late got lost on the way
i never stopped thinking about you
i thought we were meant to be
but i guess i was wrong

I cry at night thinking of you
you came into my life
you never let go
i need your love
please come back
i miss you


i miss you so
i miss you here
please come back
i need your smile

posted by Agent Zero
  We're like 711 we're not always doing business but we're always open.-Murph-boondock saints

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gotta be catchy



and the chorus?

posted by The ONEder Man
  



doestn really have one..its the kind of song that just goes...not catch phrases

posted by Agent Zero
  

Where's the music?



And the music?

posted by knn
  



i only write lyrics buit your welcome to hum a tune to it..if youd like! make your own tune up...hey make a song out of it i wont sue you...i cant copyright words!

posted by Agent Zero
  



Obviously from the heart,but needs more honing. . .to be truly effective. Yes, oh yes.. keep going

posted by ruined
  





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