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 I wrote it in english class but my teacher wasn't very happy about it. Once upon a time there was a man called John. One day John woke up and went to work. At work he met his co-workers. During lunch John met his friend Jean. Jean was from France. John had never been to France but Jean told him it was very nice but because his wife was American he wanted to move to America to live with her. John thought that was sweet. Later John went home and went to sleep, then he woke up and had no hands. 
posted by Pawnatron |
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 Where did his hands go? posted by a |
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 Pawnatron: Later John went home and went to sleep, then he woke up and had no hands. Classic! 
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a: Where did his hands go? not "where"... ...but "why?" posted by Pawnatron |
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I already thought there's some mysterious ending (like Jean was a demon who took John's hands to feed them to his flying tiger for example  ), but is it just sex? posted by a |
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 I want to laugh, but I wouldn't know what I was laughing at... posted by nocturnal_anonymous |
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 Pawnatron: Later John went home and went to sleep, then he woke up and had no hands. i understand what you're getting at but how? 
*edit* As in how do you understand that from "no hands".. not, er, anything else 
posted by ryder |
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 Enlighten the rest of us. posted by sangu |
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 sangu: Enlighten the rest of us. Here's a little bit of an enlighening thread: IMO → How to tell if a man is single posted by a |
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a: Here's a little bit of an enlighening thread:
IMO → How to tell if a man is single I got that part but why Pawnatron: Later John went home and went to sleep, then he woke up and had no hands . did his hands vanish
posted by ryder |
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I hate say this, but...I think b/c he woke up & suddenly, he couldn't see his hands b/c they're down there... posted by a |
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No he just woke up and had no hands, they were there when he woke up but the next day? BAM! gone... Here is another story... Once upon a time there was a man called John. One day John woke up and went to work. At work John got a bit tired and made himself a cup of coffee, but he didn’t finish it because it tasted strange. So he poured it into the sink and went back to work. During work John felt a pain in his stomach but he didn’t think much of it. Then later he felt better and went home and died in his sleep posted by Pawnatron |
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Pawnatron: No he just woke up and had no hands, the were therw when he woke up but the next day? BAM! gone... I don't know what to say Pawnatron: Then later he felt better and went home and died in his sleep Ah.. 
Usually I'd say start a new thread with a new story.. .. but I'll rethink that on this one
posted by ryder |
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